... lovingly birds'

1.
here hangs love
a vulnerable aviary
no bird's seen as yet

2.
two birds – seen unseen
seen unseen
their madness

3.
two birds – music began
a baby born, stillborn
music fled

4.
life – misery, yell,
desire, desolation –
an undelivered sms from death

5.
here
where life dies
death, only death enlivens

14 comments:

Simran said...

Enigmatic

Jay said...

My favourite so far.

Leo said...

amazing! the first and the third verses are most striking! loved it

Leo
http://leonnyes.wordpress.com/

Defiant Princess said...

beautiful verses.
you've gained a follower!

Defiant Princess
http://khanvibes.blogspot.com/

PsycheBubbles said...

---x put words here x---

i am speechless! :)

Raksha Bhat said...

Beautiful:)

subtlescribbler said...

what tangible verses! amazing!

beautiful :)


sarah

Pratibha The Talent said...

Wow! Superb!!!!!!!!!

Nandita Prakash said...

simple words
extraordinary knitting
:)
loved it

lisa said...

Stephen oh Stephen
This ,your therapist will get a chuckle out of all I copied ,ha ha

You Keep on pushing that mind of yours
one day sweetie ,you will be rich and famous ,you will be remembered !!

just think sweetie ,you be able to afford ,your new love ,without mommy ,supporting you both ,
Or just maybe ,your mommy could high your new love as her new maid ,and she will fit right in with all that are care takers of her yard

you little devil you ,this fame in creation is so rewarding and touching ,How you spend wasting Time to create such Rewarding Fame for me ,Wow!! you are amazing man ,now writing a novel ,how do you find the time

have a nice life aaron,anwii,awniii40,Rob,calkid,oh silly me ,I forget ,you have many user names and male or female ,just so convincing ,you make all look like pretty little Idiots

isn't life perfect ,I think so

today is great ,you look so stupid aaron ,as you just don't hold the facts about nothing smiling
Get a Divorce sheeshh

lisa said...

get a divorce

Dibakar Sarkar said...

@lisa: Divorce? Whom to divorce?

... Madhumathi ... said...

Amazing poetry :)

nrazdan said...

great free verse!

http://rindposhmaal.blogspot.com/

Related Posts with Thumbnails