1.
here hangs love
a vulnerable aviary
no bird's seen as yet
2.
two birds – seen unseen
seen unseen
their madness
3.
two birds – music began
a baby born, stillborn
music fled
4.
life – misery, yell,
desire, desolation –
an undelivered sms from death
5.
here
where life dies
death, only death enlivens
here hangs love
a vulnerable aviary
no bird's seen as yet
2.
two birds – seen unseen
seen unseen
their madness
3.
two birds – music began
a baby born, stillborn
music fled
4.
life – misery, yell,
desire, desolation –
an undelivered sms from death
5.
here
where life dies
death, only death enlivens
14 comments:
Enigmatic
My favourite so far.
amazing! the first and the third verses are most striking! loved it
Leo
http://leonnyes.wordpress.com/
beautiful verses.
you've gained a follower!
Defiant Princess
http://khanvibes.blogspot.com/
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i am speechless! :)
Beautiful:)
what tangible verses! amazing!
beautiful :)
sarah
Wow! Superb!!!!!!!!!
simple words
extraordinary knitting
:)
loved it
Stephen oh Stephen
This ,your therapist will get a chuckle out of all I copied ,ha ha
You Keep on pushing that mind of yours
one day sweetie ,you will be rich and famous ,you will be remembered !!
just think sweetie ,you be able to afford ,your new love ,without mommy ,supporting you both ,
Or just maybe ,your mommy could high your new love as her new maid ,and she will fit right in with all that are care takers of her yard
you little devil you ,this fame in creation is so rewarding and touching ,How you spend wasting Time to create such Rewarding Fame for me ,Wow!! you are amazing man ,now writing a novel ,how do you find the time
have a nice life aaron,anwii,awniii40,Rob,calkid,oh silly me ,I forget ,you have many user names and male or female ,just so convincing ,you make all look like pretty little Idiots
isn't life perfect ,I think so
today is great ,you look so stupid aaron ,as you just don't hold the facts about nothing smiling
Get a Divorce sheeshh
get a divorce
@lisa: Divorce? Whom to divorce?
Amazing poetry :)
great free verse!
http://rindposhmaal.blogspot.com/
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